12月可谓是考试月,四六级在前,考研在后头。许多小火伴都忧虑会在英语作文上掉链子。当然,想要真实前进作文水平还得靠平常不断地堆集和练习才干厚积薄发。可是关于想要暂时抱抱佛脚的兄弟们请不要错失这一篇福利。修改将分为最初,缘由,转机,办法四个视点,从经济学人傍边为我们总结出独具匠心的应试写作模板,分红上下两篇,今日先介绍最初和缘由两个有些:
具有一个好的最初,作文就成功了一半。修改再在这儿收罗了几种不一样方向的最初表达,助你赢在最初!
1.想标明某某主标题前热议不断/是抢手论题,咱们一般会怎么说?
sth has been hotly debated/discussed these days;或许the debate over sth continue to rage on?
经济学人一篇关于无人机越来越多地使用于医疗傍边的文章:drone deliveries are advancing in health care中就有这样一个新颖的表达:
the current buzz inamericais down toa pilot programme by the federal aviation administration (faa), which hopes this will help it develop a regulatory framework.当前在美国致使热议的是联邦航空打点局(faa)的一个试点项目,该机构期望这将有助于其拟定一个监管规划。
从中咱们可以获取一个句型:the current buzz (in someplace) is down to xxx.
buzz作名词标明唧唧喳喳的说话声,也就是热议,比方咱们常说的”盛行词”就是buzzword。词组be down to标明“归因于….,在于….”,所以这句话标明”当前致使热议的就是……”。
比方直播经济咱们可以套用句型:the current buzz inchinais down tolivestreaming economy, whichhas evolved into a $5bn business.
再比方说这个网络霸凌疑问,引得我们谈论与反思,咱们也可以套用着说:the current buzz is down tocyber-bullying, as social networks give people unprecedented access to the personal lives of almost everyone.
这个句型还有另外一个变形的表达,雪人关于“地摊经济(street-stall economy)”的一篇文章:china once banned street vendors. now it welcomes them是这样说的:
a generates much buzz about ba使得b致使了热议。这个句型非常合适用于最初先说一个表象,或一个作业,再转而引出作业不和的论题。举个栗子,疫情时刻云作业app盛行一时,这致使了我们对【居家作业/远程作业】的热议。咱们可以说:together microsoft teams, zoom, 谷歌 meet and cisco webex have now registered over 300m users.that generates much buzz abouthome-working.
2.假定写作的主题是陈词滥调,但多次呈现,然后引人重视或许担忧,咱们可以怎么说呢?
经济学人一篇关于我国当地政府债款疑问的文章(as growth slows, the spectre of local-government debt looms once more),值得咱们学习:
concerns aboutlocal balance-sheets in chinahave recurred over the past decade. recently they have come into sharp focus again.在曩昔的十年中,对我国当地资产负债表的担忧多次呈现。迩来,它们再次变成我们重视的焦点。
咱们从中获取句型:concerns about xxx have recurred over +一段时刻. recently they have come into sharp focus again.
单词recur标明重复呈现,重现。看一个例句加深形象:this themerecursseveral times throughout the book. 这一主题在整部书里呈现了好几回。所以这个句型就了解为:在曩昔多长时刻里,某某疑问老是重复引人重视/担忧,迩来它再次变成焦茹/重视重点。
比方这个交通拥堵疑问,尽管是陈词滥调,但仍然让人头疼,咱们就可以说:concerns abouttraffic congestionin chinahave recurred over the past decade. recently it has come into sharp focus again.
又或许说这个雾霾气候,尽管蓝天保卫战一向在打,雾霾仍然是一个劲敌:concerns aboutsmogthat envelopes many citiesin chinahave recurred over the past decade. recently it has come into sharp focus again.
又又或许说这个气候变暖:concerns about climate changehave recurred over the past decade. recently it has come into sharp focus again.
感触屡试不爽啊~敲黑板:写作主题是老疑问从头拿出来提的时分,就可以,
3.假定一个表象是一个新鲜事物,早年不常见,如今很常见/很盛行,想杰出这样一个今昔比照时,咱们又可以怎么标明?
在经济学人more chinese are home schooling their kids一文中,作者说到,如今许多的父母选择在家教育自个的孩子,这个表象早年可以不被了解,但如今却越来越广泛,原文是这么表述的:
in the west home schooling,once regarded as eccentric, has become more popular in recent decades.在西方,一度被视为异常的居家教育方法,近几十年来缺越来越广泛。
从中咱们得出句型:xxx, once regarded as eccentric, has become more popular in recent decades/years.
eccentric标明古怪的,不符合常理的。咱们也可以根据具体的主题换成其他的描述词也可。popular假定你觉得太一般,也可以换成名词局势gain popularity,或许词组catch on;be in vogue等等,都可以标明某事如今盛行一时。
比方关于远程医疗,商场一向未能拓宽,但在疫情的推进下风生水起。咱们就可以说:telemedicine,once regarded as eccentric, has been in vogue since the the covid-19outbreak.
再比方抑郁症,这些年患抑郁症的人数日益攀升,提示着咱们要留心心思安康疑问,所以假定考题是和心思安康有关,咱们也能套用句型:depression, once regarded as eccentric, has been all too common in recent years.
4.布吉岛小火伴们发现没有,10篇作文里,可以5篇会呈现:”众所周知,…….”这样的高频表达,可是咱们会怎么说呢?
as is known to all?as everybody knows? 想从数万张考卷中锋芒毕露,咱们需要一点不落窠臼的说法。来瞧瞧经济学人is america losing its appeal for brainy foreigners?一文中怎么描绘“众所周知”的
it is a truism of american politics thatthe interests of the less educated, like high-school graduates, need better protection.美教育程度较低的人的利益,比方大学结业生,需要非常好的维护, 这是美国政治中的一条常识。
truism意为 “清楚明晰的道理;自明之理;陈词滥调”, 因而句型it is a truism that ….,就等于咱们说的as everybody knows, 可以了解为众所周知….。
比方2021考研英语一写作中,主题是关于“习气”,咱们可以创始名言:杰出的习气是成功的一半。这时咱们就可以套用该句型说:it is a truism thatgood habits are half of the success.
再比方早年六级真题中有一篇讲”人际交游中彼此了解和尊敬的重要性”,咱们也能在最初来一句:it is a truism thateveryone in the world cannot live without interacting with other people.
5. 最初段还有一个固定套路:两边观念论说。即对待某一个疑问,我们议论纷纷,定见纷歧。这有啥好的说法?咱们扔掉“different people have different views”, 来康康经济学人咋说的?
雪人上一年对《区域全部经济火伴联络协议》(rcep)做了有关报导,咱们看这么一段:yet「opinionsvarywildlyasto」thesignificanceofthatachievement.「some」seercepassounambitiousastobelargelysymbolic.「others」seeitasanimportantbuildingblockinanewworldorder,inwhichchinacallstheshotsalloverasia.可是,关于这一作用的意义,我们议论纷纷。一些人认为rcep短少宏愿壮志,根柢上只是标志性的;而另一些人则将其视为世界新次序的一个重要构成有些,在这个新次序中,我国在整个亚洲指挥若定。 咱们可以从中心获取并改写出一个非常根柢但写作考试时或许能救命的句型:yetopinionsvarywildlyastox.someseeitasa,othersviewitasb.其间x是谈论中有争议的作业/情况,a是甲方观念,b是乙方观念。
这个句型好在简练明晰,规划清楚;在引出主题的一起,也论说了两边观念。
在考研和雅思考试中,写作很大有些都是观念类标题;而咱们写首段的时分,一般写2-3句,包括两个板块:布景介绍两边观念论说。后者就可以用上这个句型! 咱们拿雅思作文标题来举个比方。比方考到间隔年(gap year),有些人觉得间隔年能开阔视野,让学生遭到训练,而有些人觉得这可以会让他们失掉更多的机缘,然后落后同龄人。yet opinions vary wildly as tothe merits and demerits of taking a gap year. while some see it as a golden opportunity to broaden their minds and gain more experience,others view it asa distraction which makes it difficult for them to keep up with their peers.
当说完了表象,咱们一般会来谈谈缘由—究竟是啥构成了这样的表象?这儿修改给我们举荐几个精简的句型,供我们在写作时参阅参阅:
what has happened? it is partly…
这段文字选自why germany’s birth rate is rising and italy’s isn’t一文,讲的是德国生育率在不断降低后慢慢增加的现状。这段文字便说明了生育率增加的第一个缘由:
what has happened? it is partlya statistical quirk. the fertility rate is influenced by the timing of childbirth.发生了啥?这在必定程度上是计算数据的异常。生育率受生育时刻的影响。
从中咱们可以获取句型:what has happened? it is partly…自问自答的设问方法会使文章更显生动。
partly标明必定程度上; 有些地,用以阐明有些缘由。咱们也常说it is partly because of/due to/explained by+ 词组,或许it is partly because +语句。
来看两个例句:1)axiom’s lower budget is partly explained by elimination of the waste common in government spending.
没有了政府开支中常见的浪费,这是axiom的核算较低的缘由之一。2)this is partly because se’s hardware-first approach is deeply rooted in its culture.这在必定程度上
是因为硬件为王的打开理念深植于三星电子的公司文明中。
生育率降低,构成人员老龄化愈加杰出,2021年,韩国归纳生育率数值为1.1,不到世界均匀水平2.4的一半,而我国总和生育率为1.5支配,现已跌破戒备线。主张备考的同学多多重视这一社会疑问,这是一向以来的抢手考题。咱们下一年的新班也最新参加了这个论题,我们记住重视哦~
ais the biggest factor, followed by b.
比方在miserable millennials:a bleak view of the future一文中,谈到了年青人多次换岗的缘由,它是这么说的:
dissatisfaction with payis the biggest factor, followed bya lack of opportunities to advance.最首要的缘由是对薪酬的不满,其次是短少提升机缘。
这个句型仍是很简略记住的吧~factor标明缘由,相同表达缘由的单词还有reason, driver,force, contributor, explanation等等,可以替换进来。
followed by(紧随这今后;其次是)联接两个缘由,奇妙地避开了first, second,或许next这样烂大街的说法。
换岗 (job hopping)一向是写作的一个抢手论题,所以咱们可以把这句话记下来,假定碰到job hopping的主题作文,就可直接套用。
the blame for xxx is pinned on many things, including a, b, c,and d.
跟着我们日子方法的改动,肥胖疑问日益杰出,过度肥胖相同会影响人的身体安康,所以肥胖疑问不失为一个抢手,经济学人obesity:the dark side of light一文中总结肥胖缘由时用到这个句型:
the blame for rising obesity rates has been pinned on many things, includinga more calorific diet, the rise of processed food, a lack of exercise and modern man’s generally more stressful lot.致使肥胖率上升的缘由有许多,包括a.高热量饮食、b.加工食物增多、c.短少训练, 以及d.现代人压力增大。
blame咱们晓得,标明责任;责怪,一般是指坏事或错事,所以咱们可以得出这个句型必定是用于某个表述不功德物的缘由,词组be pinned on恰当于due to, 标明“归因于或许归咎于”,一般也有点贬义颜色。假定这儿咱们这儿是要叙说好的事物的缘由,就可以换换单词,把语句改成the reason for xxx is attributable to many things,including a, b, c,and d就可以~
这儿咱们借用”年青人爱换岗”的比方来套用以上的三个表达缘由的句式试一试:
job-hopping among young people is increasingly frequent as 30% of college graduates quit within half a year, and over 60% leave their jobs within two years.
1.what has happened? it is partlydue to dissatisfaction with pay;
2.dissatisfaction with payis the biggest factor, followed bya lack of opportunities to advance.
3.the blame for frequent job hopping is pinned on many things, includingdissatisfaction with pay,a lack of opportunities to advance, unpleasant working environment and unreasonable working hours.
the current buzz is down to xxx/ a generates much buzz about b
②标明一个陈词滥调的疑问,多次呈现,然后引人重视或许担忧时:concerns about xxx have recurred over +一段时刻. recently they have come into sharp focus again.
③标明一个某样事物比较早年愈加广泛,做今昔比照时:xxx, once regarded as eccentric, has become more popular/gained popularity/caughton/been in vogue in recent decades/years.
④标明“众所周知….”时:it is a truism that xxx.
yetopinionsvarywildlyastox.someseeitasa,othersviewitasb.
①举出一个缘由时:what has happened? it is partly…
②罗列两个缘由时:ais the biggest factor, followed by b.
③罗列多个缘由时:the blame for xxx is pinned on many things, including a, b, c,and d (贬);the reason for xxx is attributable to manythings, including a, b, c,and d (褒;中).
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